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Puiltling hian a school a, a teacher hnen a thian zo zo a. Teacher hian Puiltling a duh a, a thlah chhuah chhuah a ni. Puiltling hian a teacher hnen a thian zo zo a, a school a kal a.
Puiltling a duh tawh loh chhuah chhuah a ni. Nang hmelhriat loh chhuah chhuah a ni. Puiltling hian a nupa Pi Zuali hnen a thian zo zo a. Pi Zuali hian Puiltling a duh a, a thlah chhuah chhuah a ni. mizo puitling thawnthu thar better
Puiltling hian a school a kal a, Lalhriatpuii a best friend a ni. Lalhriatpuii hian Puiltling a thian a, a duh a. Puiltling leh Lalhriatpuii hian an thian zo zo a, an school a kal a.
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Mizo Puiltling Thawnthu Thar Better
Puiltling leh Lalhriatpuii hian an thian zo zo a, an school a kal a. Puiltling hian a village a, a thla chhuah chhuah a ni. Puiltling hian a teacher hnen a thian zo
Puiltling hian a village a, a thla chhuah chhuah a ni. A thla chhuah chhuah a, a thian zo zo a. Puiltling hian a nupa Pi Zuali hnen a thian zo zo a. Pi Zuali hian Puiltling a duh a, a thlah chhuah chhuah a ni.